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    Re: Thin Horizons Mp3s

    Hi,
    Thanks for presenting this piece. My first observation would be the lack of flow throughout. Perhaps legato on the first two notes of each bar would improve this. To many rests mean you won't sleep at night hi!!!

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    Ray

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    Re: Thin Horizons Mp3s

    <<Perhaps legato on the first two notes of each bar would improve this.>>

    I agree with that. That's more from my bad programming/piano playing skills than my intention. When sung it definately would have a smoother sound.

    Thanks for your comment!

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    Re: Thin Horizons Mp3s

    I think listeners will do well to take note that, as you
    say, you are in the first-draft stage on this. That
    said, some fine progress on this; and in mind's ear,
    I think you're coming along with some good material
    for the musical stage in these drafts.

    Keep it coming!

    Best,

    David
    www.DavidSosnowski.com
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