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    "Skyrider"

    Here's my attempt at an exciting fanfare suitable for a sci-fi/adventure:

    http://www.bolt.com/dlmusic/audio/2287723

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    Well done, dlmusic55! This has a great feel to it with an inspiring melody and strong orchestration. If I may make one critical comment, it would be to suggest that you create a stronger dynamic contrast towards the end. Really build it around that part at 2:10 to the end!

    Thanks for sharing!

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    Re: "Skyrider"

    Some wonderful melodic work in this, dlmusic55;
    and a great feel for brass writing. I'm not well
    versed in writing for films or games, but I enjoyed
    the uplifting and inspirational thematic work a
    great deal. I'd suggest thinking about developing
    this into a formal piece.

    David
    www.DavidSosnowski.com
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    Re: "Skyrider"

    Quote Originally Posted by Reegs
    If I may make one critical comment, it would be to suggest that you create a stronger dynamic contrast towards the end. Really build it around that part at 2:10 to the end!
    I do have the strings re-arranged and up an octave and I was concerned about making it too "overdone" for lack of a better term. Any suggestions on how to amp it up without making it too overcooked? Or do I just not need to worry about that.

    Quote Originally Posted by etLux
    I'd suggest thinking about developing
    this into a formal piece.
    I'm sorry, I'm still very ignorant about musical terms (I've never taken any classes just read some books on music theory but mostly worked from my own ear) and I'm not sure what this means.

    I appreciate everyone's replies. This forum is great in how you are able to give honest, constructive feedback and still be generous with positive comments.

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