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    New song and would like comments :)

    Hello!

    I made the start of a new song, first time I try that kind of music too its a bit dark anyways say me if you like it or not, it sounded good for me but since I have 0 theory I am not that good of a judge

    Oh and I dont think this would sound good on cheap speaker!

    http://www.rentgame.ca/song/toune30.mp3

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    Re: New song and would like comments :)

    Hi There

    I do agree that it's dark, but I like that so there's no trouble here with me!! I think that you did a good job especially with the horns. Good work


    Steph
    alter ego moviemaestro

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    Re: New song and would like comments :)

    Hi Stephanie,

    Thank you! I dont know anyone who know anything about music here (where I live), so the first comments I ever get are from here

    Saldor

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    Quote Originally Posted by Saldor
    Hi Stephanie,

    Thank you! I dont know anyone who know anything about music here, so the first comments I ever get are from here

    Saldor
    Please, may you tell us what you used to make it, and what was your aim?

    If you tell us more, you will receive more attention too....

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    Re: New song and would like comments :)

    Hi,

    Since I am quite a beginner still, I do only music becauseI like it and have no intention to put it no where (for now). Once I get better and I can reearrange my songs orchestration better maybe they will be for something I wanted to do more like a darker music then I usually did.

    Saldor

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    Re: New song and would like comments :)

    I really like it. I'm listening on cheap speakers, and it still sounds great!!

    Good job!
    -Chris

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    Re: New song and would like comments :)

    Yeh, I liked it too.. Short structure, but very interesting chord progression.

    The dark aspect is the type of work I like, reminiscent of a Russian funeral march.



    I wonder what it would sound like to replace the lead horn with a contrabassoon, clarinet, or any lower octave wind instrument. It could create a more eerie presence.



    Nice!

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    Re: New song and would like comments :)

    Hi,

    Jsp2, Thanks for the comments, I tried with a Bass clarinet and I liked it. I will continue the song a little more before update it.

    cptexas, oh with cheap headphone it sure sounded bad, tried it.

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    Re: New song and would like comments :)

    Nice Piece.Dark is GOOD(sometimes)It has a touch of Prokofiev about it,Dark and Balletic.Look forward to the update.
    regards

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    Oh yes, it's dark. And very good. One can imagine an evil army on the march. This piece is begging for expansion and development.
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