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    "I Oversee the Maintenance of the Toolshed"

    I am writing a piece for classical guitar, keyboardists and percussionists for the short film "I Oversee the Maintenance of a Toolshed". More info on my web site. I wanted you all to hear it so far. The only non GPO is the Classical Guitar, which is from NI Kontakt. Grammy nominated Apostolos Paraskevas will be the guitarist.

    http://hopkins.composerarts.com/audi...olshedntro.mp3

    I'm interested in hearing first impressions on it so far.

    - Jesse Hopkins
    http://hopkins.composerarts.com

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    Re: "I Oversee the Maintenance of the Toolshed"

    Doesnt help if I say sounds great, does it?
    Say it anyhow: sounds great.
    Constrictive criticism:
    Between 0:40 and 1:0 you switched for me from guitar to harp. If thats not your intention, I would rework this part.
    I'm also not allways happy with the tonal color of the piano in this context. To find out , I would replace it with marimba or muted harpsichord and bring the piano back only where needed.
    hope this helps
    rené

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    Thumbs up Re: "I Oversee the Maintenance of the Toolshed"

    I was waiting to hear percussion depicting the title a bit more with some “Tool Shed” metal sounds. I guess when I read "Maintenance" and "Toolshed" it brought about my expectations. Other than this, it is an excellent piece.
    Styxx

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