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Vlado
07-28-2003, 10:56 AM
Hello,

This is my first piece of orchestral music (Ultimate Strings & SAM Horns) and I\'d like to hear your opinon.

http://www.prozone.sk/vlado/after_the_war.mp3 (\"http://www.prozone.sk/vlado/after_the_war.mp3\")

Thanks a lot

Vlado Hudec

Alexcremers
07-28-2003, 11:54 PM
Vlado,

It\'s short but I like it, except for the ending where strings and bones are unison.
Funny how these oldtimer strings still deliver.


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Alex Cremers

Markus S
07-29-2003, 07:59 AM
Hi Vlado,
very nice harmonies! Sounds interesting. What is personnally disturbing me is that we are in a tonal harmonie at the beginning and then in a modal harmonie (d minor without c sharp). Not a good idea I think - use c sharp. Another suggestion could be a *very* simple theme, a melodie, like a scale that is ascending or something, like this maybe it\'s a bit empty. At your place I\'d keep the harminies and maybe work out some instrumental colors with it, or contrast of mass. F ex when V VI arrives (A7 B) more orchestral mass,
anyway, sympathic little music images/icons/smile.gif
Markus.

lex
07-31-2003, 05:47 AM
I like this..for a first piece it is very very good...

Short and simple , yes....but also emotional, and has a nice color as well...
plus it has nothing to do with J Williams.. images/icons/wink.gif

good work...

Alex